jueves, 6 de noviembre de 2014

A WONDERFUL WORLD

Why music is necessary to us?
Music provides us a different world to dream of because there are many moments we need to be distracted o simply we want to dream in a different world without troubles.
Some people believe that music is their way to escape from illness, boredom or the real life. This life is really difficult many times and we need a pill which help us to live calm and happy. For many people this pill I said above is music. Music has become an important role in our lifes.

1 comentario:

  1. I do love music too.
    I think you can rewrite the last sentence: "Music is an important element in our lives" (why did you use "role"?)
    Cheers!!

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