1. Nowadays, a high percentage of girls get pregnant at the age of 16 above all in America.
1.1. Due to the fact of no use protection.
1.2. They want to claim the attention of their parents.
2. At this age, girls are not prepared to be mothers because of their immaturity and most of them do not have a serious job to maintain their children.
2.1. They have to spend so much money in diapers, milk, clothes and all the necessities a baby required.
2.2. Young mothers may suffer from depression after giving birth.
2.3.The young father could disappear because of the panic that being a father of a family at this age may cause him.
3. Some parents do not accept helping their daughters with the babies because of the disappointment of the new situation.
3.1. On this way, the young parents have to face the music and go ahead alone.
3.2. Some of them have to give aside their studies and look for a job to maintain their new family.
4. Youngsters have to be conscious about the consequences of their acts and to know hot to face them in case they will commit something like I have explained above. Million of 16-years-old girls have been young mothers and some of them did not receive their parental support and this is so sad.
Interesting topic but the intro (including the thesis statement) is not clear. It should state the idea you want to develop; namely, the fact that getting pregnant during teenagehood is irresponsible and may have bad consequences. You talk about it in paragraphs 2, 3, 4 but not in 1, which is important.
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